Here is another first chapter critique. It ended up being again longer than I expected, but what are you gonna do? Share this:FacebookXMoreRedditTelegramBluesky Weight loss tips and reactions July 29, 2024 Next Post Patreon Critique July 18, 2024 Previous Post Leave a Comment Cancel ReplyComment* Name* Email * Website Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment. Δ Search Newsletter Make sure you don't miss anything! Subscribe
